SWNOVELXO Chapter 5: Chapter 5
My phone is dead — just a cold, useless piece of plastic in my pocket. I'm holding twenty dollars crumpled in my hand. The motel sign glows across the street, $49.99 + tax.
The blue timer burns in my vision: 21:00… 20:59…
I'm eighty dollars short, and my money is trapped. A freezing wind cuts through me. I need to think—hard.
I must rely on my resources and my creativity. The System's words feel like ash in my mouth. What I have now is twenty dollars in cash, a dead phone, a university ID and desperation.
My eyes scan the street. The shops are closed, and the windows are dark. A bus-stop bench flickers under a failing light. I notice a lone man smoking beneath a streetlight, staring at his phone—his phone is glowing, full of power.
An idea forms in my mind—ugly and humiliating, but perhaps my only shot.
I cross the street. My legs feel stiff and numb. The smoker glances up at me. His hoodie hide his features, and his frown deepens. Suspicious eyes track each step I take.
"Uh… hey, man?" I grunt, my voice strained. The freezing air burns down my throat. "I need a weird favor from you?"
He inhales deeply, then exhales a thin stream of smoke from the side of his mouth, his expression unreadable.
"My phone's battery ran out," I said, holding up the lifeless black rectangle in my hand. "I have got… uh… online cash—PayPal, Venmo. Just need to log in real quick, pull some cash. Five minutes, tops."
He looks me over—eyes scanning from head to toe. The juice stain. My shivering. The raw panic I can't hide.
"You a cop?"
"What? No!"
"Scammer?"
"No! Look…" I fumble, pulling the crumpled twenty from my pocket and holding it out. My hand shakes. "I'll give you this. Twenty bucks. Just need five minutes on your phone. Hotspot, maybe? Please?"
He stares at the twenty, then at me, then at my dead phone. He takes another slow drag. "Fifty."
Fifty, Cash up front or fuck off." His voice is cold, unyielding.
Fifty dollars? That's my entire twenty in cash, plus the thirty I have trapped online. It leaves me with nothing. The motel fades from view. The alley returns. The timer glows: 20:30… 20:29…
I need that cash. I need out.
"Deal," I choke out. The word tastes like rust.
He smirks and nods toward a grimy bench beneath the streetlight. "Sit, here is the phone." I hand him the twenty dollar. He pockets it swiftly, then passes me his phone. It's warm, glowing—a sleek new model. Battery: 78%.
My frozen fingers fumble. I pull up a browser and type my bank login, praying it to work. The connection is slow, too slow. The smoker taps his foot impatiently.
"Hurry up, time is running out." he mutters.
Finally, the login screen appeared. I entered my username... then paused, thinking: "Please remember this," as I typed my password.
[ERROR: Password Incorrect]
Panic surged through me—cold sweat running down my neck. What was wrong? Did I change the password? Had the system messed with it? I tried again. Same error.
"Problem?" The smoker leans in closer; his breath smells of cheap beer and cigarettes.
"No—just…forgot. One second!" My mind goes blank. Think, I try my old password—my birthday, Leo's birthday. Nothing.
[ERROR: Password Incorrect]
The timer mocks: 20:00… 19:59…
I need that $31.57. It's my ticket off the street.
Last try" the smoker growls. "Or give me my phone back. You keep the twenty? Ha—i'm just joking." Desperation claws at me. I close my eyes. Think, Ace think. The System accessed it. How? Did it change the password?
A stupid thought crossed my mind "Should I try it?" But it would be a gamble. Oh well—whatever. I typed,
SystemOverride
[LOGGING IN…](via Auxiliary Access Protocol)*
The screen flashes and shifts. My dashboard appears: Balance $31.57. Finally relief rushes over me.
"Got it!" I gasp, pulling up Venmo. I start a payment request—no, wait. I need cash. Fast. Venmo to Cash? Not without fees. Not without time.
The smoker snatches his phone back. "Time's up, deadbeat."
"No! Wait! Two seconds! Just sending–"
He slips the phone into his pocket and stands. "Deal was five minutes. You got your login—done." He turns and starts to walk away.
"Please! just a minute. I need to get my money!"
He stops, but only for a beat—then laughs, a harsh bark that echoes down the alley.
"Not my problem. Enjoy the cold." He strides off, melding into the shadows.
I'm left standing there. Twenty dollars gone. Balance still $31.57. Trapped. Useless. The timer: 19:30… 19:29…
The motel sign glows. Taunting. $49.99 + Tax. Maybe $55 total. I have $31.57 online. I need $23.43 more. Cash.
Hopelessness crashes over me, heavy, Cold. I sink onto the grimy bench. Head in my hands. The wind cuts through me. Tears sting, freezing before they fall. The System's gamble got me halfway, then stranded me. I stare at the dark street, knowing poverty is waiting to swallow me whole.
My eyes catch movement across the motel office. A bored-looking guy behind a plexiglass window was reading a magazine.
A final, pathetic idea crossed my mind.
I drag myself up. Cross the cracked parking lot. Push open the smudged glass door. A bell jingles weakly.
The clerk looks up. A man in his mid‑forties—greasy hair slicked back, he suspiciously looks at me through thick glasses. His nose wrinkles as he sizes me up. "Yeah?"
"I want a room," I manage to speak "Cheapest one for one night."
"It will be $55.49 tax included, Cash only."
"I… I have some cash." I fumble in my empty pockets. But there was nothing. "And… online? Venmo? PayPal? I can send it now? My phone's dead, but…"
He scoffs "We only accept Cash." After saying that he goes back to reading magazine.
"Please" I whisper "I have thirty-one dollars online. I can send it? I'll owe the rest. I swear I'll pay tomorrow."
He doesn't look up. The bell over the door jingles as another man enters—big, bald, heavy-eyed. The clerk, Jerry, grunts and stands. "Shift change," the new guy says.
Jerry hustles off. The newcomer watches me—hesitation in his gaze, not disgust. He sighs, sliding onto the stool. "Rough night, kid?"
I nod, words tangled in my throat.
"$55.49" he says, softer "Cash"
"I… I have $31" My voice cracks "Online, venmo, paypal. I can send it to you right now. Please i just… I need to get off the street. Just for tonight." I gesture helplessly at the dead phone. "My Phone's battery is dead. But if you have yours…?"
He stares at me for a long moment. His eyes are weary. Not unkind. He pulls out his own phone. An old, cracked model. "Venmo"
A flicker of hope slices through me. "Yes. Thank you."
He unlocks the app and shows me his Venmo handle: @BigMike_NiteOwl. My fingers tremble as I take the phone. I tap at the screen—SystemOverride—and watch my balance: $31.57. I send $31.00, typing "Motel" in the note
[SENT] I whisper.
He watches the notification pop up on his own phone and nods. He pulls out a worn ledger and writes something down. "You owe $24.49 by noon tomorrow. Or I call the cops. Deal?"
"Deal" I choke out, relief and shame tangled in my chest.
He slides a key attached to a huge plastic fob across the counter. "Room 7, it is down the hall, last door. Don't make noise. Don't break anything."
I grab the key, fumble with it. "Thank you. Seriously. Thank you."
He just nods, already looking back at his phone.
I stumble down the dim hallway. Smells like mildew and disinfectant. Carpet sticky under my worn sneakers. Room 7. The key scrapes in the lock. I shove the door open.
The room is tiny. Dark. One dim lamp by a sagging double bed. Stained yellow wallpaper peeling at the corners. A smell hits me – stale smoke, cheap cleaner, and something vaguely sour. Like old sweat.
I don't care.
I close the door. Lock it. Slide the chain. The sound is loud in the silence.
I lean back against the door. The cold from outside still clings to my clothes, but the biting wind is gone. The crushing emptiness of the alley is replaced by four walls. A ceiling. A lock.
I slide down the door until I'm sitting on the scratchy carpet. My whole body shakes. Not just from cold. From the release. From the sheer, overwhelming relief of not being outside.
The blue timer still glows in the corner of my vision: 18:15… 18:14…
$31.57 sent. $20 lost. $0 cash. I owe $24.49. I have nothing. But… I'm inside.
Suddenly, the blue System box flashes, bright and intrusive in the dim room.
[Task: The Beggar's Gamble - COMPLETE.]
[Objective: Acquire $100 USD within 24 hours.]
[Status: $31.57 USD Acquired (Via Financial Instrument Liquidation).](Remaining $68.43 Not Secured)*
[Technical Compliance Achieved: Funds Acquired Within Parameters.]
*[Reward: $100 USD (System Funds) - Credited.]*
*[Reward: Skill: Basic Haggling (Level 1) - Unlocked.]*
A new notification appears below my timer:
[System Funds: $100.00 USD](Accessible via Designated Financial Interface)*
And a strange sensation floods my mind. Like a dusty manual opening. Images flicker – negotiating prices, recognizing hesitation in a seller's eyes, knowing when to walk away. Basic Haggling. Level 1.
But I feel nothing. No triumph. No joy. Just hollow exhaustion.
$100 System dollars. Trapped. Like the other money. Useless without a working phone to access it.
I still owe Big Mike $24.49 by noon. I have $0 cash. And a dead phone.
The System chimes again, cheerful and cold:
[Congratulations, User: Ace!](You Have Escaped Destitution… Temporarily)*
[New Primary Directive: Wealth Consolidation.]
[Stand By For Next Task…]
The blue box vanishes. The timer remains. 18:00… 17:59…
I sit on the scratchy carpet of Room 7 in the Nite Owl Motel. I'm out of the cold. I "completed" the task. I have $100 I can't touch. A skill for haggling I can't use. And a debt due in less than twelve hours.
I won.
So why do I feel like I just lost everything?
A single, harsh laugh escapes me. It echoes in the sour, silent room. The juice stain on my shirt glows faintly in the dim light. A trophy from a life that threw me away.
The only sound is the dripping of a faucet from the tiny, dark bathroom.
Drip… drip… drip…