Chapter 50: The Prologue That Fought Back
"Some beginnings refuse to be forgotten."
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🌑 [Scene: Ashfield Crater – Center of the Broken Battlefield]
The earth pulsed.
The ashes stirred.
And from the burnt fragments of forgotten words, a figure rose.
Wrapped in a cloak of cancelled beginnings.
Eyes empty — not of emotion, but of context.
> "Who are you?" Riven asked.
The figure looked up.
Voice like torn parchment:
> "I am the Prologue That Was Denied."
> "I was meant to be your beginning."
"But they chose a different first line."
Lightning cracked above.
Riven stepped forward, tense.
Mirael and Lyara stood behind him, confused.
> "You mean you're… a version of me?"
> "I am what you would have been…
If you had burned slower."
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🕯️ Lore Reveal: The Alternate Start
The Prologue That Was Denied (PTWD) is not a ghost.
He's a fragmented draft.
A character built from Riven's first concept, written… then discarded.
A kind-hearted, gentle boy who never raised a sword.
A version who trusted too easily.
Loved too deeply.
And died too quickly.
But in the ash of the Flameclock…
He found ink again.
And now… he wants revenge.
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⚔️ Duel Begins – Riven vs. The Lost Self
PTWD raised his hand.
Reality trembled.
Ink bled from the sky.
Words peeled from trees.
And suddenly, the battlefield became a manuscript.
Riven stood atop the title.
PTWD stood on the first line.
> "You cannot win," PTWD hissed.
"Because I am what you left behind."
> "Then I'll burn you properly this time."
The fight erupted.
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🗡 Style Clash – Flame vs. Forgiveness
Riven's flames carved into sentences.
PTWD responded with empathy shields — protecting himself with memories of Selene's smile, Lyara's fear, and Mirael's faith.
> "You fight to destroy," PTWD said.
"I fight to belong."
> "You were too kind to survive!" Riven shouted.
> "You became too cruel to live!" PTWD shouted back.
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💥 Flashback Spiral – Forced Regrets
PTWD stabbed Riven with an unwritten sentence.
Suddenly:
Riven was 10 again.
Holding Caelen's hand.
Letting go.
Then—
The night Selene betrayed him.
Her tears.
Her whispered, "I'm sorry."
PTWD whispered:
> "I remember everything… that hurt you."
"You turned it into anger.
I turned it into hope."
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🔥 Breaking Point – The Duel of Flame and Soul
Riven gasped.
Fell to one knee.
The battlefield warped into pages tearing themselves apart.
Mirael screamed.
Lyara collapsed.
Reality was editing itself.
> "Finish it," PTWD said softly.
"Kill me…
But remember…
You were me once."
Riven shook, eyes burning.
And he did something no one expected.
He lowered his sword.
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✍️ The Rewrite of Mercy
Riven raised his Flamechron Quill.
And wrote into PTWD's chest:
> "You were the beginning I couldn't be."
"But you were never wrong."
PTWD's eyes widened.
He smiled.
And for the first time…
He became whole.
> "Thank you… for remembering me."
He faded — not in pain,
But in peace.
And the sky wept ink.
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🔓 New Power Gained: Echo of the First Line
> 🌟 Once per arc, Riven may invoke a past version of himself — kinder, calmer — to speak or act in his place.
🌙 Useful for diplomacy, unlocking lost memories, or resisting corruption.
☁️ Emotional price: Re-living a moment of vulnerability.
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🩸 Final Scene – What Was Unwritten, Now Exists
Riven looked at his reflection.
Saw… both selves.
One forged in rage.
One born in light.
And whispered:
> "You were the line I never read aloud."
"But now… you live in every sentence."
He turned to Lyara.
> "The past isn't done with us yet."
From behind her… a new shadow stirred.
Cloaked in silver armor. Holding…
The Pen of Final Drafts.
> "The Editor Supreme sends his regards," the figure said.
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